Thursday, June 2, 2011

EK Dynamic see Kahani -2



Well today after reading what i had written yesterday, was thinking that it will be too much boring to describe and fix the character beforehand. Doesn’t sound exciting to me. Lets do it this way. Take the story in first person mode Dhwani and fix the character as the story proceeds......
And by the way a person character keeps on changing according to the situation. A fat man can out beat the fastest runner provided he has a dog behind him/her.
So here goes the story..........
The world seems to fade around her. It seems like that there is no moment which had gone before and neither does it seems that any moment is waiting to reveal itself to her. It seems like the time is frozen and she is not able to say is she alive, conscious or dead.
Well current situation however doesn’t differ much from her previous life, just waiting and watching as life against her is passing by moment by moment without any thing or something in control.
But this time it was totally different. This time she was not able to say that she was aware where she was or how she had reached in that state.
Everything seems to irrelevant to her and at the same time she has to find herself quick to fix herself a spot in the current situation to be able to say that she is alive and conscious.
A moment then suddenly passed by, looks like to her that it passed in a years time. Everyone was staring at her as to for them she was like the puzzle scrambled infront of them and they have to fix them.  Suddenly a guy infront of her tried to exploit the opportunity of helping the lady infront of him but the fierce look in her eyes holds him to do it.
She was puzzled as to what stopped the guy but at the same time she tried to put both her legs in order and direct them to start moving. Start moving in which direction she was not sure. Right now its not the direction which was important, its the movement which was counting against time. She needs to get out of that place very quickly and then find some time to regain her senses.
Thank goodness,her both legs did not get confused about the directions and started moving towards a single direction.She had seen for people who are mentally challenged have to fight a fierce battle in just doing a simple movement of their legs in one direction. She saw that she was moving towards the gate which was opening automatically when a person reaches a certain distance to it.
This gave huge relief to her as to right now she don’t have the courage or energy to open the gate also.
The windy breeze of early monsoon  almost swept her from her feet. Now she has got a bigger problem as to find out where to go as she was standing in a courtyard of a shopping mall overlooked by 4 floors from all the sides. She felt like trapped damsel. Though she considered herself as an average looking girl but at this time she can treat herself of considering herself as a damsel in distress.
At the same time, some kilometres away from the place, was a closed airconditioned room with no windows.
“ 50 years back US dropped nukes on Japan almost wiping out the entire city. Japan after second world war was on devastated but what happened after 50 years, they got their position back for which they were fighting earlier. Now japan stands at one of the strongest economies of the world.
What exists the difference between me and you gentlemen. The six people felt puzzled as the nature and ferocity of the statement and question thrown at them. They were not used to getting questioned and this somewhat ruffles them.
We all have the same physical organs with two hands, two eyes etc etc. The powerful voice again filled the entire room.You may say the face, his height , weight . But think about a situation in which  you have a clone raised in a laboratory. Then how will you differentiates yourself with him. Its only and only his/her mind which got the answer. Your clone under simulated conditions also will behave differently than you as he is not conditioned or have the same developed and complex evolved mind as compared to you.
So gentleman its only and only your mind which holds the answer and the questions also. 

Wednesday, June 1, 2011

EK Dynamic see Kahani

Sometimes it gives me such strong feelings and emotions to write but always overcome by the fear as to what to write.
Anyways chalo ek kahani shuru karte hai, kya kahani hai , kya moral hai, kya reason hai kya character hai , kuch bhi decided nahin hai .....sub kuch dynamic hai is kahani mein....na character fix hai, na un character ka koi character fix hai.....kuch bhi pakka nahin hai .....pakka hai to bus itna kee likha hai...kahani aage barhani hai....aur iska ek end hoga....ab end kya hoga mujhe bhi nahin maloom...lets see....kood ja lanka mein beta raam bhali karenge...........
SO lets build the first character.....should start with a female one.. ......adds interest to the starting.......
So there was this female character named Dhwani....(the story of dhwani will tell you later onwards..quite interesting one). She was like a normal medium class girl with every thing of medium rating ...face, intellect, figure etc etc.....She studied in a medium class school and then college in a medium level town.
She never had excelled in anywhere in her life. And also its just in her school she always used to get medium average marks.
So this is the story of one of our character of the dynamic story who was just taking characterisation with medium tag in anything and everything of her and by her and for her.
Oh yes lets name the city also....how about mediumpur....sounds matching with the character also.
So this is the story about some people who never remained some people for their people.
So one day dhwani wake up to find her phone just dismantled ..........
Lets do after this tomorrow.......